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a woman talked to
me the other day
she told me
how her life had been
it scared bacause she was
describing me inside
i thought i was different
i thought i was alone
but she taught me
there are others singing ma sont
i told her to go on
tell me what happens next
it was many thiings
she mentioned
that i didnt
wanna go through
she said that was her story
make sure it doesnt happen to you
i awoke the next morning
i got down
and started to pray
that the lord watches me
in everyway
ive heard so muc
and seen so little
i got years ahead
i need to plan
what to do wit them
that woman went through pain
she went through much
sneeking out
dealing with drugs and such
but she told me where it lead
lost of family
sickness or dead
she told me these things
smiling as she said
i thank god i got another chance

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she lives now saying these words

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  • avatar.x
    August 10, 2008
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    i like its flow

    and the semi casual meter of composition