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Suspended

seems time is pressing
on the world around me
choking shameless seeds of ambition
from their stems...
but we remain flawless,
him and I, together-
simple and pure, suspended
undaunted.

and we move:
hourglasses holding still, unbreakable
the sands of time... simply expendable.

seems love lessens
in every aspect of our world...
eyes bear grief
that weak strands of faltering love
could never attest to.
but him and I, we're invincible
standing true to the test of earth
unknowing in our conquest:
simply dancing to the light
in the other's eyes.


and we love:
to know his joys, his hardships
wishing only for the other's happiness
and we love, simply to live.

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  • spudmeister
    August 10, 2008
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    excellent work, the imagery is beautiful.