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That Attitude

I scream
and yell my heart out.
Cookies and cream,
did you think that’s what life’s about?

I ponder
and slump on a park bench.
It just makes me wonder 
Why the thought of him makes my fists clench?

I jump around
and trash some bins around me.
All without a sound,
oh, just leave me be.

I gaze up at the sun
and it’s getting really old.
It’s blazing like it’s having so much fun
and I just wonder, wonder whether I’ve still got a hold.


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  • a.la.folie
    August 20, 2008

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    Your poetry has a lot of potential...you use a lot of expressive verbs in your writing. Keep up the good work


  • Griswold silver member
    August 10, 2008

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    Nicelt done. It's hard to get a hold of any sanity in todays world. Well stated, can feel the anger. Is that the Rugrats or something on your background? Are they angry kids? 8.0


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 10, 2008
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    Wonderfully fone here.
    best wishes hon.
    Love

    Passions


  • Florida Sunshine
    August 10, 2008

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    Excellent job ~ good luck in the final Stage ~ ~ Everyone did so great! I'm glad you were all at my side, as long as we had to ride. ~ WHOOT! I love the background btw.


  • Volfeng
    August 10, 2008
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    7.5


  • Silver Asylum
    August 10, 2008
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    Fantabulous

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