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Our Tree

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underneath our tree,
escaping the day,
our passion gives way
to lovers' play

we are one
unseen but not alone
we are one
we make this world our own


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  • Missing Carolina
    October 25, 2008
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    Lovely!


  • james119
    August 11, 2008

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    we are one
    unseen but not alone

    nice bit of poetry; this is my favorite part.

    thanks for entering

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    This is a beautiful poem We have a willow tree on our family property that we grew up on thanks for sharing goodluck in the contest much love always


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    loved this poem....

    won't even admit that I was kissing big old willow trees
    upon my last camping adventure on the Yakima River!
    I've never seen so many old Willows all gathered together.

    I loved your poem!
    the bark of that tree is incredible, many old souls in
    there it seems!


  • thejollytinker
    August 9, 2008

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    Awww, girl. Makes me think back to all the silly little moments- well, they weren't silly to me. What kinda place would this be without trees? Ever think about it? I mean, just picture the barren landscape. Glad to know what's up yours... good write.

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