Slowly the sun rises
penetrates this primal place,
turning the leaves, the branches,
into black lace against
a golden backdrop.
A work of art worthy
of a master artist,
perfectly created
to introduce tranquility
into a world of chaos.
Author notes
Picture prompt
A contest entry
- Beautiful Picture Prompt; Semi-Quickie by perfectsunset.
475 points, ended August 14, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Your imagery is superb in this; I am a dawn-watcher, and have often seen the black lace. I like the idea of dawn bringing tranquility to chaos. Very nice poem.
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Very beautiful, descriptive poem. I really liked it. Well done!
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Wow, so very true the meaning & beautiful the description. The world is full of chaos and bad occurrences; yet the masterpiece of such a work of art introduces serenity. Beautifully crafted with originality.
Excellent!
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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Wow beautiful!
Wow beautiful! Such rich descriptives and so well animated that I really felt like I was there and that is clever as it set my imagination going nicely! Fantastic, well done write on! Love it!
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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Lovely, descriptive take on the picture.
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this is a lovely take on the pic
it felt really mellow, peaceful, and comforting
good luck
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