Storm clouds go racing
To meet the rocky shore
Only fortress stands protecting
From the seas never ending scorn
How long lone hero
Have you been on watch here?
What stories could you tell
If only walls could speak
Nightmares of the sea
And Fantasies from the deep
Author notes
Picture 4 It something about it captures the imagination
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Comments
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What stories could you tell
If only walls could speak
Nightmares of the sea
And Fantasies from the deep
Great imagery here. Wonderful job and good luck!
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Wow, this piece screams curiousity. I like this piece a lot, and it goes well with the picture prompt. And, your right, the pic does capture the imagination.
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awe ty I appreciate it
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the hero refrance eas nice good job best of luck to you


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I loved this. Great job.



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wow...
I love your word choice here and the flow is amazing too...its a great write full of images....I love this write....keep up the good work...
best of luck to you in the future and in your writing
andi
(redhanded)

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thank you so much
I had wonderful insperation
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your quite welcome

andi
(redhanded)
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