you have really
got a hold on me
i dont know
what to do
anymore
i cant eat,
sleep, or think
without you
being there
making me cry
making me so sad
i wish your hold on me
was not so strong
that way every day
i can go on living
my normal boring life
as if your not
so far away from me
baby, youve really
got a hold on me
never let go!
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Awh this was sweet, I enjoyed reading it especially as it reminded me of 'Twilight' which is my current love
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Thank you very much for being patient with me, and entering my contest.
Good luck with my contest and all your other contests. -
Urgh when someone effects you as much as this, you know that you are just simply like me. I get real deep into things, but I dont' realise until it's too late. Gr, such is life.
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