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Work harder!

Listen kids we need to clean up the language and make it stick.
You need to try to learn formal rules, you need to make it work, otherwise;
you're like a tree frog on the wing of a Boeing 737 at lift off. You hang on best you can
and then the wind rips you off and plants your ass in 800 degrees, of volcanic cinder cone.

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  • Perception
    August 24, 2008
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    Very interesting write you have here. This is a very unique piece. Actually I have never read anything like it. Very good thoughts and a good way of putting them... hmm..

    Very interesting comparisons. "your like a tree frog on the wing of a Boeing 737 at lift off" -- like nothing I have ever read before.

    Great job on this piece.
    Enjoyable