You're a good girl
and I'm a good boy
but when we're alone
our play brings us joy
You take off your bra
and put on your skirt.
We pretend we are strangers
and begin to flirt
We enjoy being naughty
when we are alone
to make up for those years
we were imprisoned at home
I ask if you're good
and you say that you're not
I give you a spanking
so gentle and hot
You show me your buttocks
and they fill my eyes.
Your panties are see-through
and held by loose ties
I accidently loosen
a flimsy knot.
I try to act cool
but you are so hot.
We love being naughty
in lives so responsible.
Passion overwhelms us
and we stop being sensible.
A contest entry
- Good Girls / Bad Girls by Bean Sidhe.
650 points, ended August 10, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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Clever and amusing, naughty in showing what happens when the curtains are pulled, a little dirty cause we are seeing what supposed to be unknown.
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naughty
Just a little on the naughty side and very sensual due tot the gentle nature of the foreplay. It's hard to write soft when the subject is stiff (or smoething like that) Great job!
Rhon
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This is an excellent read. Flows very well. Keeps good pace. And the topic is very hot indeed. You have done well here and I hope that you do well in your contests! If I were choosing I would pick you for first place.
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Excellent
I love this write. Great imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done. You might enjoy my wierd little Risque series. -
Oh baby this is hot. Cold shower required.
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