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A Woman's Worth

A WOMAN'S WORTH

There just fine for no kind of reasons, and for different reasons.
All be it, she’s pleasing to me.
It’s pleasing to see her hard side and her kind side.
For her mind as well as her figure.
Hers is the Queen side to my king side.
She leaves me at a lose for words at times.
She causes my mind to wander off into places phrases can’t convey the same way as a kiss or a warm embrace.
She makes my heart race at speeds unheard of, at paces un-scaled.
There’s a rumbling in the pit of my soul from as mush as a single touch.
There’s so much being left unsaid; kept unspoken.
Now I am then left hoping that she sees the real me in between my dieing chivalry and the awakening pride in me.
Why do we men always have to hide the way we truly feel about her?
As men, do we really have to pretend that we don’t weep or loose any sleep when left to lay at her feet?
Wet kisses in dreams bare witness to things we as men tend to forget when we are not well equipped, cause we we’re simply just trying to spit pimp shit type game to our main source of sustenance.
We get entranced by the wide eyes, tight thighs and the gently timid side of the shy type. Or we get exited by the full lips and firm hips and the woman who carries a little chip on her shoulder; the bolder the better.
The longer I see her, the more I need her; to free her from being ladened by mistaken identity.
She is not the enemy!
There’s no way she’s a B-I-T-C-H, she’s more like my soul-mate.
Perfectly created in her day to compliment me on mine.
The things we’ve done to get her reveals how much we’ll do to prevent her from building up a defense against all of our advances.
Has it been that we have disregarded those of God’s commandments that speaks “Honor thy Mother”, “Cherish the WIFE of thy youth”, To whom ever finds a good woman has found a good thing”.
Men! We need to bring that old thing back and sincerely act the part.
We lack the art of what we had once upon an age before jaded thinking and tainted education retranslated that page in His-story.
That so called MIS-STORY that speaks of her glory as the beginning of living, for it is within the womb where all men begin.
Now it’s seen as a tomb marking our whole races dead end.
It is us who send our, sisters and daughters out to the slaughter of living a life without being given a life to live.
They’ve been tried and psyched out, tricked into submitting and sentenced to mental imprisonment and sent to live out their days dealing with it,
While we get away with the abandonment, misuse, mistreatment and abuse.
Nothing short of murder, we’ve reduced her birth right even further into nothing.
I’ll tell you now, a woman is everything!
And without them we are nothing!
There’s a slim chance a man can stand alone without a Queen having a seat near his throne.
Men cannot live this life alone, as the highest intelligence has shown, both ADAM and EVE would fall from grace the day they ate from that tree.
How is it then that we men, who played the same blame game as she did, when GOD approached them in the garden, be pardoned for disregarding the same rule she was given, the same as you?
There is no excuse!
The truth is that we have to truly be willing to look at women as being given to us as a gift to uplift and admire and should be treated with much more respect.
Not for lust and desire, but for the higher aspects of unity.
That to me is truly how a women should be seen.

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  • Brit-Girl
    August 9, 2008

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    hmm, this is an interesting poem.
    the form and font colour make it difficult to read but i like the story.

    exclamation points rarely put off the desired effect in poems and nearly always manage to make a poem seem comical/amateurish.

    a full capitalisation of God is unneeded.

    try reading this aloud and placing appropriate punctuation where you naturally breathe to improve the flow.

    thank you for you entry