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Butterfly Mind

I hear a flitter in my head
A page turns
Book backwards
Thousands of butterfly wings
Lie inside my skull
No use for a brain
Slightly sick instead
Nervous, anxious flutters
Like my heart without sleep
Photo album of colours
Flipping past me
Kisses on my eyes
Supposedly it hurts
But I don't feel a thing
Except this pressure
Too many beings to house
In a cocoon
They try to break free
They spurt out my nose
My mouth opens a spew of colours
Reds and greens, yellows and blues
I feel my toes twitch
My nails, they change
Creeping out my skin
I let the butterflies sweat
My eyelids droop
As I feel peace inside

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  • Angel Eyed Baby
    November 14, 2008

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    okay...... interesting... but honestly.... It does not make sense to a certain extent. It was wrote well in terms of words and such it just does not make proper sense.

  • startotheright
    August 9, 2008
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    Really interesting, whats it about??