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Its The Way I Am

The way I am
Youre judging me
Theres nothing else
For me to be
Full of hate
Revenge and fear
As I cry
This silent tear
You scream at me
I scream at you
The things you scream
I know theyre true
Im a mistake
Crying everyday
And all I wish for
Is to be told Im okay
But it never happens
Nobody even tries
Because they all know
It will just be a lie
So I sit here silently
Knowing Im wrong in the head
The only way I survive
Is by taking meds
Dont do this
Dont do that
The only one who accepts me
Is my cat
But its the way I am
So stop judging me
Because there is nothing else
For me to be

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  • Lexie
    August 9, 2008
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    wow. i think i should just print this poem out and put it on my bedroom door or staple it on a shirt. i really liked it. =) great poem.

    You scream at me
    I scream at you
    The things you scream
    I know theyre true
    Im a mistake
    Crying everyday
    And all I wish for
    Is to be told Im okay