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the monster

Ugly is as ugly does,
stays the same,
as it ever was.
Look for hope,
in my eyes.
reach for me,
and you'll find the prize.
Locked inside,
you'll see the beast.
the beautiful creature,
craving for release.
don't get to close,
or it may bite.
looking for,
a hateful fight.
Feel the claws,
ripping the skin.
blood is falling,
you can't win.
the monster screams,
it calls your name.
looking for,
a playful game.
blood and flesh,
pours to the ground.
clench your teeth,
as you hear the sound..
your losing this fight,
and you know you'll die.
you do not question,
don't ever ask why.
your mind is blank,
your eyes are wet.
sanity,
is what none of us get.
the evil child,
the one inside.
just waiting for,
another place to hide.
hold your breath,
and hold on tight.
give up your hope,
for it ends tonight

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  • poetrycall
    September 11, 2008
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    This a kind of dark. Ouch.
    I liked that it was fast-paced.