When your mummy told me
She was expecting you
I was so full of glee
Through and through
You entered the world on the
3rd of August on a Sunday
You decided to come out early
And say to mummy hey
When I first held you for the
First time I felt a special love
A love that is truely unique
And as pure like a dove
I am proud to be your auntie
You are My Special Little Angel
You are a gift from above
You can only bring so much love
I love you sweetheart!
Author notes
ScottishPrincess
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Comments
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I like this, your message is beautiful. Perhaps you could write it in free verse, the rhyme sounds a little forced in some places but it's only a suggestion.
Please could you put your username in your AN.
Good luck in the contest,
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Very Nice
A beautiful tribute to a beautiful young girl. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck
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My niece Chloe will soon be 1 in August how time flies she's a real beauty and it was a pleasure to enter your contest...Hazel
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aw this is so good. i love it :]
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awe she is adorable, you have every right to be proud of her, enjoy every momment with her.
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The Inspiration
a child can have on an extended family is truely unique. Treasure this offering as well as she who moved you to compose it.
Best of Luck
niaish
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Beautiful poem (and little girl.) Treasure her (I'm sure you do) and I bet she'll love to read this poem when she gets older. Best of luck in the contest!!
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Thank you
,I do treasure her and I plan on putting it in a frame for her for when she's older
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sweet, she is beautiful, thanks for entering
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Thank you and a pleasure to enter your contest,Hazel
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Beauty.
I am proud to be your auntie
You are My Special Little Angel
You are a gift from above
And you can only bring so much love
I love you sweetheart
So beautiful and uniquely penned. Although a bit of forced rhyme here and there, it was very well written. Great job and good luck!
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Thank you,a pleasure to have entered the contest.
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Heartfelt Write,
of love and adoration. Your words drip with the love of family bond. Wonderful thoughts within this offering.
Niaish & Best of Luck
Silent Hawk
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Thank you for commenting,I wanted to write something for my baby niece and this is what I came up with and a delight to have entered the contest
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sweet
sweet and honest write for the prompt . . liked "A love that is unique And pure like a dove" and "You are a gift from above" . . good luck in the contest . .
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Thank you
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ooh this is really sweet!! I really loved this!! you did such a wonderful job expressing yourself and your emotions for this beautiful baby! I love them! they are just so innocent and heaven sent!Thank you very much for sharing!! I truly loved this write!!
Angel
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Thank you for commentingI wanted to write something for my baby niece and this is what I came up with!!!,I just write from within,such an honour to share indeed,Hazel
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Ooooh...soooo sweet! Look at those chubby little cheeks!!! Just perfect for lots of smooches! What a blessing! Chloe is blessed to have so much love around her! And you are blessed to be her sweet Auntie Hazel!
Pam
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I know she is absolutely beautiful isn't she?,she's so adorable,love her to bits!!,Chloe is blessed to have lots of love around but we are blessed to have her love!,Hugs,Hazel
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CONGRATS
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Thank You
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