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Dragon Fang--- Chapter 2

Chapter 2
In a dark room six dragons site watching what is happening in a small glowing ball. Then the ball stopped glowing a voce said “So it is true the Goddess of Dawn has came again and as you all can see the evil has awaken. The shadow is drawn to power but why of all realm is it in jade.”    “ I don’t know Aaron but we need to know more.” Then the main dragon said “it is too early for us to act we will wheat and see what happens next so far all we know is the demons made the first move.” Then the room goes dark again then Ecarioto opened his eye his scar was burning. He got dressed and went out for a walk. The sun was about to raise then Ecarioto felt cold. He turned around to see a man in a hood. Ecarioto pulled his knife out and said “ do you want to fight me” then the hooded man said “ the dark wind is coming you must make a choice soon to save jade or to let it fall into shadows.” Then the wind blow and the man was gone the sun was up now as Ecarioto turned to go home he hared the belles ring the city was being attacked. Ecarioto ran home to his mom and nanny he was 12 years old now. He was now old enough to fight for the city. When he got home he saw his nanny and his mom waiting for him in the front room of his house. Then his nanny gave him a chain mail and his mom gave him a sword box and said “this was your father’s first sword.” As Ecarioto pulled open the box he saw a sword with the words WOLF BLADE on the side. Ecarioto put the sword on his belt and rain off to the gate he saw the city commander (Kaiser) giving orders to people. Ecarioto walked up to him but was stopped by Sakuya (Kaisers daughter) “What are you doing here” she asked “I can ask you the same if I wasn’t aloud here” Ecarioto replied. Sakuya lend on the wall and said “I have to be here now I am a priest.” Ecarioto looked at here and said “that’s good you have the power to free the soul of the one’s who die”. Soon Ecarioto looked over the wall and saw a man in dark armor walking to the city. As the man look up at Ecarioto and pulled a dark blade and said “DARK ART OF THE PHOENIX: DARK FIRE BALL” then a fire blast come from his sword. Soon the city was in flames then a man called out “here they come”. As Ecarioto turned to fight his scare burned with pain then he was in darkness with pain ripping him apart. When Ecarioto opened his eye Sakuya was sitting by him she looked at him and said “well good to see you alive.” Ecarioto smiled and looked around the city was still a mess. Then he said “were is my mom” Sakuya looked down and said “your mom died in the fire and your nanny has not been found.” Ecarioto had tears in his eyes he was now alone in the world. Then Sakuya said “my dad says you can stay with us but there is not much of a home to go back to” Ecarioto looked up at her and said “homes can be fixed but pain of a lost one takes time.”
As the years go on the city has been fixed and life went back to some what normal. As Ecarioto lived with commander Kaiser he learned how to fight with his sword and soon he was the most skilled fighter in the city. On Ecarioto 19th birth day he was given a house of his own. After moving into his new home Ecarioto went to the forest to train with his sword when he was there he saw some men wanting to fight him for fun so Ecarioto agreed to the duel. As Ecarioto entered the area for the duel he saw a kid just as old as him in the ring with a sphere. As the bell ringed to start the fight Ecarioto trusted his sword at him to test the kid skills. As the sword went throw the kid Ecarioto saw that is was a shadow copy then he felt a slash on his back and fell to the floor. After Ecarioto got up he said “your very fast what do you call that move” the kid said my name is Kyphiroth and that is what I call my shadow slash my father taught me the shadow copy move.” Ecarioto smiled he know he didn’t have to hold back on him.
An hour passed and the two were still fighting and both were very tired then Ecarioto said “hey lets finish this with one blow winner takes all.” Kyphiroth looked at him and said “O.K.” Then they both rushed at one another. Ecarioto jumped up and said “wolf’s fang slash.” A wave of energy came from Ecarioto’s sword and blow Kyphiroth off his feet. The bell ringed again and the fight was over Ecarioto won. After the fight Ecarioto and Kyphiroth became the best of friends. As Ecarioto and Kyphiroth were waking home Ecarioto said “later man I have to go and see Sakuya for my ocarina class. As Ecarioto entered Sakuya’s home she looked at him and said “your late.” Ecarioto looked away and said “sorry I was in a duel with Kyphiroth.” As he started to play his ocarina with Sakuya sing he felt like some thing was calling him. Calling him to the forest, as if some force was crying out to him. As he played his ocarina he push his feelings aside for the time.


In the darkest area of jade a demon sits on a dead mans throne just sitting as if he was asleep. Then a smaller demon entered the room and said “sir we found him again.” The demon on the throne opened his eyes and said bring him here now. Soon a man in dark armor entered the room and said “If you stop calling me back I mite be able to finish my job” the demon on the throne said “I am your new master I am DARK LORD MIDNIGHT. The grate darkness sent me here have you forgotten why you were raised ELRON.” The man in the dark armor toke his mask off and said “ never call me by my human man again I lost that name when my people left me for died in the battlefield” Midnight looked at Elron and said “ The only reason the darkness made you life again is due to that blade of yours no one can use it but you” Elron looked at the sword on his belt it was true his sword can turn into any weapon he needs but he has a job to do and this time he will find her THE GODDESS OF DAWN.

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  • Good story James it should probally be a book lol well keep on writing Searra


  • Simply a Memory
    January 27

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    Its actually very good you have a great sense of imagery, a solid plot and story line, great ideas, and interesting pov. Though you might want to check your grammer and spelling.


  • Tenshi Asakura
    November 1, 2008

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    Its getting pretty interesting now. Like it so far. I agree needs a spell check and grammar is off. but other than that its great! keep up the good work

  • davidwright silver member
    August 10, 2008

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    That's a good story you have going I enjoyed the read. I'd like to suggest that you go through and re-check your spelling. Keep up the good work and let me know when you post the next chapter. Happy trails.

    Davi