Sometimes I feel like theirs strings attached,
like I am not in control of what I do or say.
Sometimes I feel like I’m all tied up,
and it seems like I’ll never get away.
Sometimes I feel like I’m hung on a line,
like a fish that simply got the hook.
Sometimes I feel like my hands are tied,
and freedom has taken on a whole new look.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- PIF – Semi-Quickie; Subjugation of Men (Picture Prompt) by KayJay.
700 points, ended August 11, 2008, 6 entries
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Comments
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Another lyrical write, Karl... capturing a creative view of the prompt and the confinement we feel in our lives... Beautifully written and rhymed... a wonderful entry...
Ken
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Know this feeling well Karl."Sometimes I feel like I'm hung on a line" Great wording that speaks volumes. Excellent...mal..Thank you for stopping by at my page, much appreciated....
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