release me
i need to breathe
threw these wrists i cry
threw these eyes i bleed
with nothing left to loose
i have nothing left to give
nothing left to do
nothing left to say
nothing but blood
nothing but this knife
in my hand
i have nothing left but my sin
nothing left but my unsuffered pain
let me give it all away let me suffer
i deserve my losses and my hurt
just let me slit my pain away
i need to cry
i need to die
i need to escape his hell
i need to be away
i need to be alone with myself
so i can spare you the suffering of my insanity
just let me cry
and bleed
and slowly die alone in this hell
A contest entry
- Cutters, Bleeders & Blood covered chocolate by Devilish Temptation.
600 points, ended August 10, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me how bad i write^^
Comments
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You write really good! I enjoyed reading this poem so much it had quite an impact on me you blew me away with your piece very well done and good luck in my contest
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