standing over the egde
wishing to just let go
i can see the water below
blue and hungrey for my flesh
standing of this edge i have no where to go
trapped on this land high above my icey blue death
the sky screams its betrayal to this cold soul
promising storms denying me access to the world beyond
im growing empty in a sence like im a shell
losing everything once living inside to something bigger
but not nessacarily better
loosing myself to the storms and the death in the sea
i want to leave this place
be with people who understand
does a place such as that exist
does a place beyond this endless hell exist
i cant get away from this place
i cant fly away to warmth and filling promise
i wish i could breathe now
i wish i could see beyond the endless hell here
i wish i could fly away
i wish i could leavc and escape
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http://malidea.deviantart.com/art/Wishing-to-fly-93650173
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by whispernthedark.
850 points, ended August 30, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me how bad i write^^
Comments
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You did an excellent job capturing your picture. I might suggest that you click on edit and hit the spellcheck, you have several misspellings in this piece, but it is a really good poem. Thank you so much for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Ohh
I think this poem goes very well with the picture. :]
Good luck in the contest!
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~Princess of Shadows~
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