wind slam foam on shore
pounding woke the crab's morning
sucked water deep
A contest entry
- Haiku's Here! by GreenHrtPaleMoon.
750 points, ended August 15, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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An unusual entry, I liked the final line.
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thank u
thank u for the comments given to my ku. hoped I made u smiled today lol. Haley27
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I wasn't sure what the last line meant, did the water enter the crab's home? It's a hard art form, is haiku.
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thank u
Your right the crab's home interupted, because of the tidal wave rushed the shore. Glad u liked. Haley27
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Nicely Done
Great imagery.
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thank u
thank u for the wonderful sentiments given to my ku. Haley27
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