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A Single Moment

To pass a single moment
Where all is so serene
To feel with every part of me
Beyond my wildest dreams

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To know we're just an aspect
of what appears obscure
To human eyes that have not seen
Through paths that they inured

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To know nothing is consequential
Yet magic's found in every place
And all things work in harmony
Through the fabric of time and space

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  • rhondasail
    August 13, 2008
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    To know we're just an aspect
    of what appears obscure
    To human eyes that have not seen
    Through paths that they inured



    This is the chewy part of this write...those inured paths we all access and carry like an old pair of sunglasses filtering our vision. Well said, Poet!

    Glad I popped over...Peace, Rhonda

    • Poet-treeman
      August 13, 2008
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      Thank you Rhonda for visiting my work. I find you a kindred spirit in our journey through this realm. You have good energy. I'm glad we made this connection. Thank you. Albert.