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to think of.

if your going to fall,

fall before you regret.

 

if your feeling down,

no matter what you say to yourself

you have your mates beside you.

 

everyone needs to let a great out burst

of a cry out once in a while,

wrorse thing you can do is keep it in,

in the end it will come out and

when it does oh it will be mighty.

 

i've just recently been dumbed..

and still hurting now,

in my head im thinking,

i dont no what im going to do.

maybe this is what drove me to do this

little poem type thing.

 well anyway

i know i have my friends

 

 

thanks for listening to this first poem ive wrote out side of school and put it on the internet.sorry if some people dont like it or think its stupid..

just needed to keep my mind of this one girl

 

 

^^^^^^^^

my name

 

what should i improve in my future poems?

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  • cbizzle
    August 11, 2008
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    Thats good, good job. !m!(>.<)!m!


  • Yorkshire Rose
    August 11, 2008

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    its a really good poem, go for it keep writing, if your emo, you should checkout-- jackie 12 and Blood.Stained.Tears---- they r fellow emos as well, and nice people, welcome!


  • She burns
    August 9, 2008

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    So true and inspiring too, it helps people to understand the meaning of having someone like a friend close to us, who we can share everything with...

    As our love grows for each other, and so as our hearts

    Keep writing, you're amazing


    • the-falling-emo
      August 11, 2008

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      thanks

      thanks for the comment >.< tis my first poem on the internet O.o lol sounds kinda erm strange but owell >.<