growing dark shadows
dancing figures cross the wall
headlights in the night
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A contest entry
- HAIKU PIF by Swan song.
2700 points, ended August 16, 2008, 48 entries
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330 points, ended September 20, 2008, 37 entries
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OOOH! Now why didnt *I* think of doing a Haiku! Ha, very inventive; nice job and best of luck to you in the contest
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Great job!I liked it!
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Tjhat would be something to see. well done.
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Very good Middle line is eight syllables This poem had potential and in my humble opionion i would work it a little more Go over it again and try a few different words I think it could be a real winner
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I read this two times and the images went right to my heart. 
Beautiful writing, dear poet. Haiku is profoundly fine as a form and instills the image of the scene like no other poetry.
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