Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Time

drop a minute
next to the urn
of washington, and
cartels will coordinate
for ya

red clay and a
second bar--
a splintered base
and a moth wing
with no piece of loot
to hold after the auction
completes herself

and the rumbles
of temporary agitation
subside.

it's sad
how quiet time rests
on minivan seats and
the shoulders of
backroads,

heartbreaking in the
same way that
uncultured explorers are
when they insist their visitors
come in for tea

and to take a quick look
at the maps
they've been drawing.

Author notes

Prompt 4

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    August 11, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    *grins* I really like this, it has a snap-shot feel to it.

    A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in the contest.

    Rose