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Eminence of Artistic Glory

The heart yearns in
darkened glory,
alluring souls to its
fascinations of life.

Incantations of mystique
conjure wonderment which
translates into creativity.

Predestined is the spirit
of a poet to carve into
reality the nuances of life.

Capturing the brilliance
and glory of a creator
who will not be denied.

But rather through love offers
insight into his many portals
of infinite majesty.

Seen through the baptized eyes
of blessed creatures annointed
with artistic delight.

Author notes

In this piece I try to explain that a
poet is made by the creator and has little
choice but to express the beauty that is God.
Although I'm sure some don't hold my view.
It is my expressed opinion that we are all
given gifts before we're born that are inplanted
in our DNA. To be used as blessings and to promote
His glory.

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  • Malabu
    August 18, 2008

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    im not sure this is something purposeful...being born a poet...i truly feel life makes poets poets...something of a void in life brings them to the brim of a overflowing yearn from the silent beat of a drum...while on a journey in a world of self


  • nevadapoet
    August 17, 2008

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    EXCELLENT WORK

    Your words in the poem ecplained exactly what you were trying to express without the authors note...just thought you should know your job was done very accuartely...a beuatiful picture drawn with your perfectly arranged words.
    Nevadapoet

  • Topnotchsy
    August 12, 2008

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    Beautiful piece and message. I too believe that we are put on this world and given talents which we are supposed to develop in order to help better the world and sing the praises of the Lord. Beautiful, beautiful piece.


  • JinSays gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    Predestined is the spirit
    of a poet to carve into
    reality the nuances of life.

    Capturing the brilliance
    and glory of a creator
    who will not be denied.

    Amen. This is wonderful. Blessings to you, best wishes,
    Jin

  • nelsen0679trafalger
    August 9, 2008
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    Superb

    Ah, 'tis a fine write and equally applicable to all faiths christian and non-christian as well. I am not a christian yet I find this poem to be inspirational since I can replace the word "God", with "Supreme Being", and your poem then fits into my spiritual beliefs. Thanks again for sharing this one with us.


  • Intravenous Jesus
    August 9, 2008
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    Your choice of words is excelent, it evokes such a precise meaning. Most people who brush this subject end up being vague and cliche, but your approach is quite fresh. Very well done, though I have a few discrepancies with your philosophy, not to say that it isn't interesting though. The title is really great too, just from a glance it makes you want to read this piece.


  • Riamh
    August 9, 2008

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    Predestined is the spirit
    of a poet to carve into
    reality the nuances of life.

    This poem was lovely. This part in particular, was special.
    The chosen words, beautiful. It reads wonderfully aloud.


  • nevadapoet
    August 9, 2008
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    well done

    A great tribute and great write.
    Nevadapoet


  • whos my humblepie
    August 9, 2008

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    I partially agree with you,the ideas are similar but do deviate from each other to some extent. we should all praise God for our human abilities.

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