"Rain is my Fool"
By Pmel Oki
Sweet rain pour down my window pane
And wash all stains away
Clear and pure is your water true
For heavy pains that stays
Bring me a rainbow after your due
Bring me a sky of a bluer hue
Sweet rain slow and with gentle flow
Help my garden grow
Sun and you are the earthen jewel
But you’re my only Fool
Share in my laughter, share in my smile
After I cry so stay awhile
Author notes
A Song For Children. Please click on the link below to listen to the audio file: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Izj2fR22Hw
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interesting, i like it, nice little ditty, i might get around to the sound file at some point too. i especially like the personification of water being true. i like water. it's a powerful force
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hey this poem is freaking sweeeeeeet!!!!!!!!
i love it it also rocks my world lol great write
~Moonchild~
*oh btw here is my pic i look silly lol but enjoy -
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Thanks! ^^
Not at all. You're pretty in your picture!
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Really pretty =] I could imagine it raining on a sunny day when I read this poem, for some reason or another
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GREAT job
diggin it majorly
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Sweet!
Thank you for comment!
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I like this! Very well written.
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Thank you sir.
Hearing that from you is kind of hard to believe. ^^;
Thank you very much!
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Ah! Fresh water, a lovely song. As sweet as the sight of raindrops on the windows, when you are snug and safe inside.
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Hi Pania!
Thanks! I'm a little embarrassed. ^^;
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