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Irresistible

Pure insatiable covetousness
Of one refined exquisite male form
Deliciously intriguing, inviting one
To perform
How do I conquer thee?
How many strings are attached?
How many beautiful women?
Have you my hero despatched?
Or is it all vanity that I see displayed
Am I striving in the wind? then why, do I feel afraid?

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  • KayJay
    August 11, 2008

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    Nicely done... "insatiable covetousness" a wonderful expression of feeling... and the many questions arise from that... Very well penned and a great entry...
    Ken