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Golden Heavenly Light

Dedicated to those who see the light!

Wistful dreamy trees looked scratched,
Into a backdrop of golden light etched..

Etched into the sky by God himself,
Tree branches swaying in the wind like a garden elf.

Elf to sway gently in the golden breeze.
So breathtaking a view I am on my knees!

Knees I kneel upon to pray,
And thank God for another beautiful golden day...

Day of golden wondrous light,
Beaming through the barren tree's so bright!

Bright and Brilliant like no other I see,
My eyes lit up with gold and glee..

Glee at how lovely is God's heavenly light,
There is just nothing like his splendor, right?!

Copyright:K:August 2008

Author notes


Allpoetry.com Contest
August 2008
Contest Beautiful Picture Prompt; Semi-Quickie by bella-babie
15 poets
10-20 lines
.....or 40-100 words
*If you choose to reserve, please come back and finish*
I fell in love with this picture. Please bring out its beauty with your words.
Make it enlightening, full of imagery, depth, genuine emotion, originality & metaphor.
I want your BEST for this, since the picture is just so breathless.
-Rules-
*No bashing
*No profanity
*Please be ORIGINAL.. think outside the box.
~That's all... be brilliant & have fun
Enter this contest
* This is an anonymous contest - your name will be hidden from editors
* Closes in 12 days, or after 7 more entries
* Rewards - Gold: 300
* Prewritten poems are not allowed.
* Enter a new poem

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Beautiful golden sunlight seen through barren of leaves
trees.

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    Aww this was so beautiful and spiritual. Penned with such grace and serenity. Lovely imagery & thoughts.

    Best of luck & thanks for entering


    • Kazytc
      August 11, 2008
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      Thanks millions!

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are
      very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Its a great hnour to be in your wonderful contest, thanks for the privaledge.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx


  • Nicada silver member
    August 10, 2008

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    Beautifully Written!

    Such an inspiring and hope filled write here! Great job relating to the picture prompt. I am in awe of this wonderful poem you have penned here. Absolutely beautiful and soothing! Nice work and I wish you the best in the contest. Blessings, Patty


    • Kazytc
      August 10, 2008
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      Thanks millions!

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are
      very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX


    • Kazytc
      August 10, 2008
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      Thanks millions!

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are
      very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it and found it soothing and of inteest.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX


  • toomysterious
    August 9, 2008
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    My thoughts exactly. Good luck.


    • Kazytc
      August 10, 2008
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      Thanks millions!

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are
      very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX

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