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In His Cage

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within his head he has regrets, the inner peace is gone
thoughts are spread, he is set the pleasure can't be wrong
thoughts have fled, he reflects, a pleasure within a thong
ladies in red, he objects, for hard core is what he longs

his mind is fighting for, some type of respect
yet,he smiles with what's in store, when ladies strap it on.

now he's down on all fours collar nicely connects
yes indeed he begs for more, but concious screams its wrong!
thoughts went wilder then before, this time he doesn't object
"come on now I am your whore, in that cage is where I belong!"

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LMAO. thanks for linking me there KayJay...awesome pic

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  • KayJay
    August 11, 2008

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    Well, well A wild ride, indeed... and done with such power and detail... but I won't ask ... I'll just admire this and say Well Done! A great flow and rhyme and a brilliant take...
    Ken

  • sayonara
    August 10, 2008
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    Point taken!

    Good thoughts; relate well to the pic. Dark, but on the mark.
    (Line 8 "conscience"?)


  • HisDirtyLiLPoet
    August 9, 2008

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    Seeing that I'm the ONLY beotch that's going to leave her tramp stamp here -- all I gotta say is OUCH!!! My guess is that man's either got some serious freak issues goin' on -- even for me. LOL You kick some serious arse in this piece! Hellz yeah!

    I have a potato gun that works wonders if you need some enforcement!

    She-ra


  • Volfeng
    August 9, 2008

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    MMmnnn, yea she worries me too, Jeff! Yikes, Hun!Love you anyway Babe


  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 9, 2008
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    You worry me

    Quite a lot!!!!

    Great stuff


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 9, 2008

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    Excellent,

    Another displayed piece you have shared here showing you can surely pen about anything. Well done with the picture prompt, and as always, you it! I love ya lots! -Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo


  • Griswold silver member
    August 9, 2008

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    What the hell? Strap-on? Ohhhhhhhhh nooooooo you dont...... Nicely done and very funny honey. Love you sweetheart...Scott

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