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A Poet named Sue

 

I know of a poet called Sue,
A pretty woman, she is too
Right now though, I hear she feels blue,
To cheer her up, what can I do?

She’s my lover’s sisterly friend,
They stand together, till the end
Helping, one and others past mend,
So, my love to you Sue, I send,

The sue in person I don’t know
Just only of her wondrous glow
And know her poetry’s loved so
Sending tingles from head to toe

For friends I know she’d walk a mile
Do anything to make them smile
Maybe swim in the river Nile
Nah, Cause that would mess her hairstyle


Sue writes in meter form and feet
And also writes a sad upbeat
I know of sue she is so sweet
To read her poetry’s a treat

 

 

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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    Thank you so much for this lovely poem to cheer me up and make me smile, it did both of those things.
    Congratulations on the HM, I wish it could have been more and special thanks to Jade for running the contest to cheer me up.

    Love
    Sue


    • The Poetic Angel
      August 23, 2008
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      thanks You Sue

      i am glad it cheered you up and made you smile you deserved it and thanksyou very much for the HM

      xx judie xx
      Angels

  • Topnotchsy
    August 11, 2008

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    Another wonderful write. Sure to bring a smile to the face of the recipient. Best of luck in the contest!!


  • Ceridwens Soul silver member
    August 10, 2008
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    Oh this is so wow baby thank you, I know Sis will love it

    YLD

    xxx Jem


    • The Poetic Angel
      August 10, 2008
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      Thanks You Jems

      i hope it cheers her up a lil

      im so glad you became sisters

      xxx your angel xxx
      angel inkwell


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    And to read this was a real treat too hun I am sure Sue will adore it! Your rhyme is excellent and your 4th stanza really made me smileNice background too!
    All the best with this.
    Gaylene

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