Hello Sue, I don’t really know you
But I hear you like sonnets so here goes
This is the first time I’ve read what you do
I really liked what I read, kept saying ah's and oh's
“Golden Sight” and “Autumns Crown” to name two
Your Author page, that beach scene was the best
You are an inspiration to all poetry friends
God gifted you with skills you are truly blessed
I’m sorry to hear you’re feeling so sad
But I know of someone who will hold your hand
I don’t know the trials and pains you’ve had
God will carry you for he always understand
Trophies you've won are a testimony of your gifts
I hope these few words give to you a needed lift
Author notes
This is my first attempt at an English Sonnet I hope I did it right?
A contest entry
- For Sue! by Jade Jefferies.
1450 points, ended August 23, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you for this personalised sonnet especially for me, it made me smile and was a joy to read.
Special thanks to Jade for running this contest to cheer me up, it worked.
Love
Sue
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Thanks for the comments and I am glad the contest lightened your heart. May God continue to bless you and yours. God Bless
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