Is it love? Is it friendship?
Or do I want more in this relationship?
I don't know what you think, say, or do
All I know is I dream of you.
I dreamt of you the other night,
When our friendship was still alright;
But now I wonder where I stand,
Because your actions I do not understand.
I think I like you, I really do,
But I've bitten off more than I can chew;
You do not think of me the same,
In fact I'm the one you blame
Why people tease you all the same,
Why it seems just like a game.
In my friends' mouth your name departs,
And my eyes turn into hearts.
Why? I don't know, I'm not certain at all,
Why to you my heart did fall.
I wish I knew, then I won't stumble,
When I see you I won't crumble,
But then life's like that,
And I don't know what I'm playing at.
Author notes
it sounds a bit emo, doesn't it? X.x feel free to flame me...thanks for commenting!
A contest entry
- Unrequited emotions. by Lights Sorrow.
600 points, ended August 26, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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Thanks for your patience and entering my contest.
Flame. Flame. Emo-flame. Yes, it does. Did you want it to sound that way or are you looking for a change? -
it was good, but i feel you had more to write to it. Good luck in the contest.
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thank you!!
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Amazed
Your choice of words was perfect,
And your delivery, for me, has great effect.
You truly deserve praise.
I'm now in a complete daze.
Keep writing!
Never stopping... (.^_^.).\/
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