Can't you hear me?
I am crying for you everyday...
Thousand tears wishing you back...
I'm crying for your used to be...
I am still waiting here and loving you...
Would you mind turning back and look at me?
Has been a time i'm longing for you...
And these tears not gonna dryin cause of my love for you...
So much wise people said that Love is a bittersweet thing...
But, why do i only have is just a bitter one...
And i am still waiting and loving you...
Would you please turn and look at my eyes?
Before it's too late...
Before these tears turn to a red...
And still, I LOVE YOU...
Author notes
Please, a honest comment...^0^
A contest entry
- Unrequited Love by SchizoChic.
450 points, ended August 15, 2008, 19 entries
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sad... sad love... i love you...
Comments
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This is so sad and heart breaking! I know it's mean to say this but....I LOVED IT!!!!! (sorry...)
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thank you, but why are you sorry for?
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Woah...
Man this poem is exactly what I'm feeling, and what I've been trying to write for days. Through every word, I could exactly relate to it. Thanks for writing this. -
Aww... this is so sad. You emotions ran off the page as the reader passes every line.
A sad write but so beautiful.
Rose
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You must have misread the directions plz reread the section above "Rules"
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tears turning red
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I can feel your heart in this one...
I once was in the same predicament but thank GOD I am no longer
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instead of turning i think u mean turn. awsome though!
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thank you so much for this write.. it is so sad and I can relate to it which is what I am searching for.. thnak you for entering!
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This was wonderful! I almost cried! It's so sad! Good luck in my contest!
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thanks..
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This... is wonderful, I almost cried I swear, although I feel bad for you
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thank you...
have you ever felt unrequited lover?
taste like a bittercoffee with no sugar...
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Um, yes actaully I have... it's not very pleasent... And I'm sorry if this really happened to you
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Aww this was deeply emotional and heartfelt.
Your pain is spread across the page in words
that still hold hope.. a hope that a lover will come back, and realize what they lost, as you still love them deep within your heart.
It's a very hard process to overcome.
But with time, eventually, it will.
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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This is heartfelt and warm and fuzzy. I like it. Good luck.
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wow i love the changes! u definatly made it better
good job
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ooow,,thanks..
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So sad..lines are full with weakness.A lover dying to have another look from her beloved.Tears are leaving her eyes and trying to reach him.She's telling him about her thirst for him that she's had for a long time..telling him how others enjoy love while she only tastes the bad taste of it when he's is not there beside her.
She's begging him for a look..only one look before crying is a bleed..before her spirit is no longer inside her body.She's begging and begging telling him she loves him..Maybe he'll answer her call someday.
and that's all
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"Would you mind turning back and look at me?" tht line is great! ive wanted to ask my x bf the same thing! good job
xox0-christina
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aww,,thanks...
thanks for de advice...^^
i'll try..but i'm not a good poetic...
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Liked it a lot and felt it cause I'm being through this now but felt something missed in this..try to make it a little longer,a little more painful..
Tell what would happen if he doesn't turn back..tell him that it soon will be too late so he has to have a last look before you're gone forever..
To make my comment shorter and clearer:this nice poem deserves a nicer end.
bye the way line 4 is wonderful.
Thank you and I hope my comment was useful.
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