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i could kill for you

i could die for you
get into the swing of things and
shed a drop of blood or two
reopen scars and cut a little too far in
so the pain’s renewed
i could get truth a noose
and pull here, pinch there
to make sure reality’s just a little skewed

but don’t think i mind this attitude-
this shift of my longitude and latitude
because I can get into the beat of these
everyday feats and
maybe, just maybe
i could kill for you

Fire the cannons.

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  • Night Hope gold member
    January 12

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    This has a very musical and rhythmic feeling to it, Sweetie, like a song waiting to be sung. Yet, whenever I've heard someone declare that they would die for someone's love, I often suggest that they try living for them instead. More effective and longer lasting that way. Dying is easy - it's survival that's hard to pull off.