Shine; bring me to life, warm me with thy glory
Kiss my soul; my essence flow
Melt my heart with your love
Give me strength
Your golden rays penetrate
Touching me to my core
I; will stand strong and tall
I will dig my fingers into the earth
Grab what I need to survive
And touch the hearts of all who look my way…
A contest entry
- Beautiful Picture Prompt; Semi-Quickie by perfectsunset.
475 points, ended August 14, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Aww I love how you took a spiritual approach to this. Your words were very enlightening and so very beautifully touching. From reading, I got the idea of "empathy" and being empathetic from the lines
"Grab what I need to survive
And touch the hearts of all who look my way…"
... that and compassionate. Very wonderfully penned.
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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Such inspiring words. Good luck.
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