It was there,
where light peeked,
sanctioned to
my innermost;
Quietly -
as spirit met
with day,
as emotions streamed
floating to sky,
to universe -
and finally,
you.
A contest entry
- Beautiful Picture Prompt; Semi-Quickie by perfectsunset.
475 points, ended August 14, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow; this was so deep in its brevity. I loved the feelings and images you created with such beautiful words. So much meaning & depth you have penned here.
Lovely write!!
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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Thank you.
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What a beautiful response to a beautiful picture. Your words sooth and relax with a quiet contentment. Wonderful. Very refreshing.
Good luck in the contest.
Garrison
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"...where light peeked,
sanctioned to
my innermost..."
I found this warm or warming, like daybreak, those minutes before the rising of the sun. Tis fitting with the photo. Write on and good luck, sis. One.
Dez
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Wow... this is breathtaking. This is one of those poems that just fills up the heart. Bravo!
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so beautiful..
that's how you always seem to write..
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thank you dear sir!
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