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Chin-up (haiku)

in the summer grove
sunflowers drooping
on a rainy day


A contest entry

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  • GreenHrtPaleMoon gold member
    August 15, 2008
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    An excellent image.

  • Grateful
    August 15, 2008
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    lovely image here...you have created...i like rain.great job...keep writing...
  • meena krish
    August 13, 2008

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    I like the picture you have painted here. I feel like
    walking in the rain now lovely write.
    take care.


  • Lonely
    August 10, 2008

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    aw, this was a lovely piece of HAIKU.. you are writing a lot of those now a days, khairiat hai kaya?? lol best of luck in the contest

    Love,
    Lonely


  • Harrisham Minhas
    August 9, 2008

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    This is vivid and lovely.

    Rains are wonderful.
    Good luck in the contest.



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