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A "trip" back home.

Alice was a child meek and prone to violent thoughts
seeking revenge from past lovers and lost friends
she tried to kill her memory upon her arms


scars and track marks were displayed for all to see
the "trip" brought her home again
down the old rabbit whole she did squeeze

her friends were not like our friends here
they were differen't in color and sort
but alice didn't care they helped to ease her pain and hurt

alice loved her wonderland
and she loved all of her friends too
the drugs she would keep using
as to visit them each time she used

The story goes that Alice fell in love with Madd Hatter
they had 3 little babies with large heads
and one very gothic daughter

the queen of hearts hated Alice
and she hated her family as well
so to fix Alice from coming back
she sent out a tresspassing order

Alice could only visit once a year
or she would be barred for life
so deeply upset about the matter
she went back to our land
and brought Madd Hatter

Madd Hatter didn't do too well on earth
he became a big old pot head
he lost his manager postion at the job he had
and couldn't get on unemployment

Alice and Madd-Hatter were kicked out of their home
so out into the great open world Madd-Hatter and Alice roamed

Alice had track marks everywhere
and the drugs she said were not going to work
they were both equally depressed about Wonderland
and thought several times about just going back


Alice and Madd-Hatter were drinkning one day
and decided they had no future for them both
Madd-Hatter pulled out a 22 and shot Alice in the back of the head
as Alice fell to the ground Madd-Hatter held her in his arms
and said wonderland is only a few minutes away
after Alice took her last breathe
Madd-hatter took his own life the same way

Both their spirts traveled to the little door
and spiraled down the old rabbit hole
together in wonderland they wanted to be
and they were just inches from their forever home

the queen of hearts was a wicked old bitch
and never knew what was good for her
so when she heard the news of the Alice coming back
she threw a severe tantrum

Madd-Hatter and Alice lived happily ever after
in their wonderland home
and old queen bitch died shortly after
for a bad hand in texas hold em'

I guess Alice got what she always wished
friends and a family
but the heroine had brought her here the first time
and its the heroine she is still using


Alice died 7 years later after being infected with H.I.V.
but even after that she will still be rememberd
as wonderland's darkend beauty.



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  • wakawaka05
    December 18, 2008

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    God what a twisted write. I love the way that you used drugs to get and keep alice in wondering land. I can really see why you won gold for this piece.


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    August 28, 2008

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    This is definately one very odd piece, I saw a few spelling errors and it dragged on a little too long for my liking but well written, best to you

  • ShadowMorsen
    August 9, 2008
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    i love this one it is amazing!


  • Ari in Wonderland
    August 9, 2008

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    Wonderful

    It's bloody brilliant. I love how you used drugs so Alice may return to wonderland only to marry and bear the Madd Hatter's children. Then the Queen of Hearts as she always did, ruined everyone's fun by allowing her to come only once a year. Hardcore. Good luck in the contest