She's a simple girl
I'm a simple man
There's lots of things
In this world
I don't understand
She's easy pleasing
And she don't need much
Human touch,
But I do know one thing
I love that girl
More than anything
Oh, In this world
I think that we can make
A go at it
I think that we'll be
Doing alright.
I love her more
Than I ever have
That I can't ignore
Sweeeet Brenda
From this side of the tracks
Author notes
This is from the upcoming musical "Closing In On You" Lyrics and music by George Gargano/John Ringo
A contest entry
- Anything Goes by silentxparadise93.
600 points, ended September 11, 2008, 83 entries
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What do you think?
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ooh very nice would love to hear this set to music
best wishes in the contest 
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loved it!
i love how it is like a true love, where you dont have to have all these pointless things most people tink they need these days, grat poem
vanna -
awww i like love poems so you sorta won me over!
good luck in my contest! -
love it
I love it. Keep on sharing. Keep writing.
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Great stuff!!!
As a songwriter myself, I can appreciate many different styles of lyrics.
Love this!!!
I can almost tap a rhythm to it as I read...
Well done!!!
Good luck with the musical...
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I like this
I think this would make a great song. one of my dreams is to have things I write songs of course other people would have to sing them. But good job
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