Dear Love,
why do you have to hurt so much?
why do you have to feel so great?
why do lust filled nights
prove you not to feel the same way?
Love,
why is it my heart gets broken?
do they just not like me?
maybe I'm just better off alone then.
Lust,
why is it you feel so great?
drunken nights
and one night stands
just to hide the real pain.
Love,
why is it I long to have you?
I have been hurt so much
and still I yearn
for those little butterflies in my stomache.
Pain,
why do you fight with love?
why do you cause so much hurt and anger
and why do you make me feel so unloved?
Love,
I feel I will never have anyone
but yet new people come into my life
and you remove them again and again.
Lover,
what is it you want from me?
so many girls have come and gone
you will just love me and leave me.
Fear,
I fear I will never have anyone
why is it that they leave me?
why do I set here alone again?
Pain,
your a cycle that never ends
here I sit sulking away my pain
the pain just never ends.
Love,
so many have found you and say you are great,
but each time I find you,
a piece of my heart is taken away.
Love,
sometimes I want to give up on you
but I still have a little hope
that someday I will truthfully find you.
Lover,
why is it that you love me?
are you just trying to help me?
or are you just going to hurt me?
Lonley,
why do you hurt so bad?
I have no one anyways
so please don't take away what I have.
Love,
I wish you would stay away from me
my heart is slowly breaking
why can't you just give up on me?
Pain,
There isn't much more of you I can take
my heart is becoming hollow
love is digging my grave.
Love,
I beg you to help me out
I am slowly loosing my faith,
if I ask I surely will find I don't always get what I please.
Love,
my heart was once big,
but so many have torn it apart,
please stay away until I can find
the right patches to mend my broken heart.
Goodbye love,
the hope has died within me
I know now I will never find you
you have now become my worst enemy.
Goodbye Lover,
the love we shared hurt too much
I hope you can understand
that I have just given up on love.
A letter to love to show the truth
the mask behind the world's greatest thing
to unveil our eyes and tell the stories
of lost lovers, the pain, the truth and the lies.
Sincerly,
all those who have been hurt by love
and those who will be hurt once more
we bid you farwell love
we tried our best
until next time
ta-ta.
P.S Love,
I hope you understand
love does make the world go around
but sometimes the scars are more than you can mend.
In a list
A contest entry
- When Love and Death Embrace... by Zane Rose.
1000 points, ended August 22, 2008, 8 entries
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please give me your honest opinion on what you truly think of this piece I will return the favor...*muah* (redhanded)
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
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Wow babe. The more i read you stuff the more i see what an amazing writer you truly are. You capture feelings that i think every person in life goes through so very well. I love you
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Lust,
why is it you feel so great?
drunken nights
and one night stands
just to hide the real pain.
Love,
so many have found you and say you are great,
but each time I find you,
a piece of my heart is taken away.
Love,
my heart was once big,
but so many have torn it apart,
please stay away until I can find
the right patches to mend my broken heart.
I love these lines complelty.
I love the way the poem progresse from good to bad, just like a relationship
this poem explain in great detail, a guy that i know, well done x -
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thanks so much for your comment it is greatly appreciated. best of luck to you in the future and with your writing.
andi
(redhanded)
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This was very creative. I like the way you address Love, Pain, Lonely. And I'm definitely feeling this line right now "please stay away until I can find
the right patches to mend my broken heart."
Thank you for your entry.
-N -
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thank you very much for your comment it is greatly appreciative. Best of luck to you in the future and with your writing.
andi
(redhanded)
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