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my pulse dictates the tempo.

my stomach is full of regret.
fluttering over and over again.
your words are toxins that i slowly consume.
by your eyes, i am exhumed.

take me as i ascend to light form, then
part your lips and breathe in...
into the deadly facade of my kiss.
these hearts wind up, they play in overtime bliss.

my love, i walk to you beneath this waterfall,
where i only see you in crystal.
your spirit extends her arm, and i reach back.
yet your palm falls just short of my grasp.

and my spirit collides with body in agony!
an imagined thing--dreams are bittersweet!
dramatic irony pours forth from my lungs.
and to you, darling, my loaded kiss is a gun.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    Ah..very strong piece of the loveful poetry you did here with so much depth and the beauty of the emotions around it..well done....

  • dryed-up-eyes
    August 11, 2008
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    that musta been one hell of a kiss lols