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"I dream of home in the Bayou!"

In the core of night my dreams constantly return
bringing to my memory a deep desire
for my return home my soul burns
memories keep me content
many places i've stayed;  this i do not resent
my place is deep inside the swamps, that misunderstood place
where i grew up; the core of my dreams

never leaves my memory no matter how great my life seems

a more lovely place, there is none
the "ora" in the Bayou is an enchanting one

the moss draping over the aged tree
my mind gets comfort from the thought of these
the soothing sound enveloping, all around
nature communicating with nature
what peace renowned; the Bayou is alive
many known and unknown dwellers call this place home
never desiring anyplace else to roam
there is comfort and peace of mind there
the neighbors are different from anywhere
one day i'll return to this tropical delight
and anxiously away the fall of my first night!

Author notes

9/16/09 contest: "let's do this thing.....southern-fried"

8/08/08 Picture prompted semi-quick poem contest...

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  • JinSays gold member
    October 2

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    yes, those bayous...I miss em. I miss the expanse of nothingness, but the bayous and its own wildlife. How beautiful are those birds when they take to flight? thank you for taking the time to enter this contest and I wish you all the best.
    love,
    jin


  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    I loved how you made the poem personal, you took it and related it to a place you feel safe and a place of beauty and memories. So full of depth and beautiful imagery. You created a lovely scene. A treasure to read!

    Best of luck & thanks for entering


  • In Too Deep1
    August 9, 2008

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    Beautifully penned writ. I loved the imagery and resonance of emotion based on the bog and life. It is almost a love song built on the memories once known. A most enjoyable read, I wish you the best in the comp