Gracefully get your senses to rise
Like the tides roll gently in
a tense pretense to intense emotions
you know how i like to ride
motions of soft wavy oceans
all built from my magic love potion
and devotion
i set in ..
They call me the lyrical dancer
words sprayed put you in a trance
a blur or glimpse of what you might fancy
Pull a bitch-fit, full of rant spits
I'm just > > ME < <
And they might try ...
But there's no LADY like me
Bump & grind like me
Carry grace like me
Make face like me - evidently ...
Every day
I face shit that leaves me speechless
The wrong way, like placing blame
Too many people content with reaching 4 less
the lazy way ..
strong enough to get you goin'
but too weak to make your day
not growing, standing still
too stupid to realize
they do it for the thrill
...
(not done can't think anymore)
know what i mean?
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Very good start, you should finish it...
A lot of poeple on here do not understand the different rhyming patterns I use, you veer off from typical poem structues also and I like that.. Why limit oneself to structured forms, creativity is part of a poets passion...
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im real good n all just saw your pic. your still looking very good
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whats up wanted to know how you doing
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hey
hanging in there.. how u doing?
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This is really good, I think that you don't need to finish it. It's great as is. Nice flow and rhyming, they were a nice touch to it. Great write
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