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Memory

My forgotten memory
Slips into the unceasing night
Tangled fingers message my isolation
Sparks of thought convolute my addiction

The numbness paralyzes my vision
Cloudy, dark forms
Haunt my youth
Holding me in its cell

Strange visions
Leak in my subconscience
Shadows of what used to be
Before addiction enveloped me

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Lithium by Evanescence

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  • Ebbing.X.Discreetly
    August 18, 2008

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    I really like this poem!! It's beautifully and I feel strong emotions...These lines are simply amazing:
    "Strange visions
    Leak in my subconscience"
    Great Job Keep it up!!


  • stargazer.
    August 9, 2008
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    Evanescence - Lithium
    Tell me if you dont like