Little voices in my head
Whisper all your lies
They tell me how you betrayed me
Behind that angelic smile
They tell me ways make you pay
Blood will be the coin
I sneak into your bedroom
While your fast a sleep
A press a pillow to your face
You fight and struggle against me
Tearing at my arms
But you don't struggle long
Then I wrap you in your blankets
And dump you in a grave
I lay you down forever
And never do I whisper another word
Author notes
option 2 of course I am not going to write about anything but evil 
A contest entry
- ~*~Angel or Devil~*~ by thenorthernstar.
850 points, ended May 25, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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congrats on winning gold in this piece, It sincerely deserved it. I enjoyed reading this piece. You know, you are beginning to inspire me. Great job.
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very cool! I love this! thanks for entering your a finalist
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"They tell me how you betrayed me
Behind that angelic smile" descption is the key it seems. to unlock those hidden doors.
thanks for sharing this chilly piece.
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This is definitly evil but pretty sloppy.
Make me believe it.
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ok its just the rough draft but do you got any sujestions so I can make it better?
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Just to read and re-read it over in your head until it sounds perfect. There are some grammar glitches. I personally don't care for centered poems or Capitallization but that's just showy shit. It's the meat that matters.
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