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A true angel.

and as  she turned to look at it she saw a black figure behined here just huvering there. she was shocked,starteled,and frightened all at the same time. she turned around to see if anyone else could see it she was about to yell for help but when she turned around no one was there. she stood there motionless her eyes wide open drinking in the image before her. she could not believe her eyes. she turned to run out of the classroom but the next thing she new she triped right over a grave. she looked around her she was in a place that looked like a demonic demention she looked at what appeared to be the sky it was red with black mixed all together.she seen the souls of what appeared to be spirits soring around in the sky they where demonds!. there were graves every where. she looked at the one she triped over and read the name. she screamed in horror. on the grave stone her name was ingraved. she looked behind her again the figure was still there silent but you could see darkness comeing from it. she screamed at the figure saying "who are you! and where am i!" the figure just huvered there silently then a sound came out of it like screams of agonie of people in uncomprehensable pain. it hurt her eardrums. she covered her ears screaming.then it said in a wrasping voice "who am i? i am darkness itself! where are you? you are in my dimention my domain!". "you are a Fallen Angel. every few centries we get angels like you to dense to know where the boundries are in the world of the humans to stay in now you are in my domain and you will now be my sevent for the rest of eternity!" he swooped over her she was covered in darkness she was screaming. the next thing she knew was her wings were gone they wernt on her back anymore her wings were taken from her now she could not escape the darkness and go back into the light where she belonged.she looked at the demonds above. she seen them comeing for her she tried to run but it was no use they could fly faster than her. she triped over a grave again this time on top of what seemed like cells. she looked into them each one had an angel in them all by themselves with there wings torn off like hers. one spotted her and cried for her to come closer and with haste.she ran over to the angel she was an elder.she said "you must believe in yourself chiled while you are not locked up these cells are cast with powers that keep us from joining together to escape please help your fellow angels with your help we can get our wings back and escape!" she was so happey to hear that she can help get all of the angels out! but the elder looked at her with a frown and said "but there is a condition to be able to geet all of the angels out of here you must sacrifice your wings so we can gain ours!" she looked at the elder with disbeliefe of what she was hearing but she looked at the sky  the demonds were getting closer she looked at the elder saying "what must i do?" the elder looked at her with a faint smile and a tear in her eye saying "you must beleive with all of your straghth that you can defeate the evil!" she stood up and smiled at the elder saying "thank you and always remember me!" she walked away the demonds where about to claw there sharp hands into her skin but before the could touch one hair on the angels head she started to glow a very bright white like heaven itself just entered the domonic demention. all the demonds flew backwards in pain of the light. all the angels in the cells broke free with there wings on there back they escaped but the one who was left turned to cristal. with no wings. she stands there with a smile and a tear going down her face. she will be there for all eternity known as the "celestial angel" she gave her wings for the love of the others that was traped......A true angel.

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im sorry ariel if i wasnt dark the whole way lolz i hope you like it i would have added more detail and made it make more sence if i had time lolz i hope you like it!!

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  • XxXEmoRainDropsXxX
    August 10, 2008
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    awwww!!!! that is sooo sweet!!!! i loved this!!! it was AMAZING!!!!! u had spelling/grammer errors, and since i know who u are, u dont need to add the ponies and stickers and myspace thing. but other than that, i LOVED this!!!! it was AWESOME!!! lolz. great job!!!!