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Holding on

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My heart beat rises as I feel your silken skin
Leading to the edge of temptation
Drinking in your smell I am over come
The glory of friction ignites our passion
The taste of love is in the air
Holding you close will never be enough
My urges overcome me
The essence of your lips drive me further
Never was there a more perfect time
Never any better feeling
My lust insatiable
Come to me
Let us feel life together
Let us breathe as one
Let us…

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    Wow, this just left me breathless. The passion you expressed with your words stands out clearly and beautifully. Loved how you ended it leaving the reader thinking with what happens next "Let us..."
    sort of allowing us to fill in the blanks.

    Amazing!
    Best of luck & thanks for entering