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- Double Date with a Porn Star -

 

 

 

 

 

 

Moans masturbated, tickled male fantasy, fueled obsession
to paper mache' porn star- Dawn Hass Risen
intimately within inappropriate positions, viewer requested;
bent over- salted sexy pretzel, assets posed for paparrazis
bulging with cameras erected atop tripods, mouths ajar~

as sunrise seduced, fondled flesh, exposed every element
tanned aboard two legs wrapped around neck of one
naive man stunned by heavy breasts, silicone weighted down.

Devoted fan rested his head in-between mammary mountains
before manicured nails moved him into a more private area
meant for ecstasy as exploration hardened his manly member
while a wardrobe malfunction- unexpectantly summoned Dawn's
'imprisoned' eight inch lightsaber for head to head combat.














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3. Wonders in the underwear of dawn.
...(Dawn)


Ten Lines more or less...
did a smidge more...


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  • Amera gold member
    August 12

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    I agree with Arkbear, this should have taken the gold. Your original lines are well worth a re-read. Bravo!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Arkbear gold member
    August 11

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    ....inappropriate positions 

     

    OMG.....you should have won Gold....paws down!

     

    You are the best.....you can take any Prompt and make it into a Novel to seel millions.....and such a way with words....

              ...and visions.. 

     

    Lots of love to you......hey....I'm moving Sept 12th!

     

    NWA RES Public 1 List 4 Photo

     

     

    ...yes it needs some sanding and new varnish on cedar planks outside, but it's only 7 years old....on 5 acres, and 250 from Beaver Lake ~

     

    No longer a CA Bear


  • penman gold member
    August 10
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • maralisa gold member
    August 10
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    a great take on the promt full of vivid imagery and strong emotion good luck in the contest

  • Arzab
    August 9

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    Sizzling write. Seemed very different from the last piece I just read on here a few minutes ago. Beautiful imagery and very sensual emotion expressed. Thanks for sharing your talent and best of luck in the contest.

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