to hear you say that you give up,
tears me up inside,
because i cant help but feel
kind of responsible for whats said.
I do love you more than you know,
and i do want you more than i say.
so please dont say you give up,
please dont say you cant try anymore,
please please just listen to what i say,
just this one last time.
please just dont give up.
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There is a Peter Gabriel song that this brought to mind...Don't Give Up......
When your in love...or love someone,
the feeling of watching them lose hope is almost unbearable.
You have captured that here.
I felt this person circling the drain,
and possibly bringing you with them.
The desperation was felt through your well placed and compassionate words.
This was very heart felt lass,
a riveting piece,
great job.
Bless you for taking time to read my work.
peace where ever
you may roam gypsy,
LOWELL
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