Jack was an angel,
One day he met the Devil.
The devil's name was Kate.
Jack knew that Kate was evil.
Kate knew that they were complete opposites,
even though they liked eatchother.
They couldn't go out.
They missed another.
Jack couldn't stand it,
so he flew down to the underworld.
She was so happy,
all she could do was twirl.
A contest entry
- Anything you want by whispernthedark.
745 points, ended August 22, 2008, 42 entries
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Comments
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You are not a devil! Or a demon! anyways...this was good
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There are some grammatical errors in the second stanza. You need a space between each & other. Also each is misspelled. This has a nice rhyme scheme, good theme. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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a nice poem full of great imagery yes sometimes opposites can atract good luck in the contest
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yes
thats amazing you have been on longer than me and you are still better
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