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I have never been so proud
As I hear my name
Spill through your lips
I can feel my whole world
Spinning
As I hold my breath
Thinking of sweet caress
Standing
Feet tight together
Wrapping my arms around your neck
Seeing our future
Playing before me
In your eyes
Dancing
In a spinning room
Of our desire
A carousel
Memories of admiration
Tied to
My beloved
With the affair
Of loyalty
In heart.

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Love My US Marine
"Led Zeppelin"
Inspired by I'll be ~ Edwin Mccain.

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